blacktiger3915

It was okay. I guess that I have to read it again because everyone says it was great, but I don't see it. I'm I going blind???????!!!!!!!!!!! :o :smt022

Hey there and welcome to the site! I waved goodbye to my mother for one last time as her car pool pulled up and the driver of the car honked ...

This was great. I loved it. Wow :shock: . I give it :smt023 but two. :D Keep up the good work!

I sat there on the edge of my bed (bad form, this is narrative) Pondering to myself...I felt like I were dead. (Doesn't flow) There I sat. Sat. (Doesn't work) ...

I'm glad you mentioned that it was a haiku. But i still don't like it very much. I have read many good haiku's and this isn't one of them. Sorry, ...

You start off with friends, then your group keeps on getting; (Why the colon?) smaller and smaller every year. Soon you will be alone. Have you ever been lost? You ...

I liked this poem. I think trees are beautiful any way and you really captured the beautiness of the growing process of the tree. Loved it. Great writing, I can't ...

I liked this. For some odd reason though, this poem has a "Queen of the Dammed" feel to it. I don't know I guess I have a weird mind. Anyway, ...

Wow!!!!!!!!!!!! Great poem! I want to steal this please. :D :twisted: Just kiddin'. :smt005

That is sad when people do that. That is why I don't give money to people who beg. I'm afraid they will use it for the wrong stuff. And it's ...

Awww. That was sad. :smt010 If I see him, I would be gladly to smile. I don't really care how someone looks. If they're nice to me, I will talk ...

I agree with everybody else. Anyway, it was okay. You can write better poems than that, so I suggest that you coach her or him if they want to write ...

I loved this poem. I have tears running down my face. :smt010 :smt022 Great job! You're poem should have came with a box of tissues.

I really liked this poem. I thought it was written quite nicely. You have talent in writing poetry. I will love to read more of your work. Best Wishes!!! :D ...

I'm argeeing, this is clearly not a poem, but it really can be one. Just put the words into stanzas, and bam! you'll have a poem. I can't wait to ...