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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Alone

    One, it's not really clear about what's going on. Two, the grammar is just terrible. I'd say just make it clearer, fix the grammar issues, and try not to repeat ...

    Aug 3, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I Will Remeber You

    I like it. It's really good, but seems to missing something. Like it wants to be something but it's not. I'm not one to judge but maybe it's a presence ...

    May 9, 2010


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