blackhike

this is a prolouge right, while try and keep it just that, a prolouge gives us a backgound information, your sentences were skippy at best, try lengthing this piece, maybe ...

ugh guys common I totally need some reviews, rip this work apart Plz.

Shockingly this seems like a great idea, I like the spin you put on lucifer and his family. not to many writers choose to put the anti-christ as someone good ...

i justed wanted to say I'm impressed with your idea, it's the first time I've read a romance story and have no clue how it's going to end. I really ...

thx for the advice i'll reword as best i can and to explain I about the sword, it wasn't that it didn't make a sound, it's just that the demon ...