blackbird12

Jagged, Why did you feel the need to ruin everything that was building and growing so beautifully in this poem with that absolutely horrendous closing line? Seriously?

Dali is a dream. And so is that poem.

Recently finished revising this, decided to post the finished version.

Wow, thank you so much! You gave me quite a few high compliments there. It's so encouraging to hear something like that because it's like a little affirmation of my ...