bigdreamsforagirl

I really liked the beggining but i thinkin the middle and end you had so many ideas you just wrote them all down and i felt you should have structured ...

I think the concept is really interesting but you should work on the characters diologue.

I really liked it. Specially from the guy's point of view...i could feel all his love for Aubrey :)

I loved it. "Don't hold my hand if you're gonna break my heart" I think a lot of girls would like to tell that to a guy.