biancarayne

[Written in paragraph form because this is how I start writing a helps me to just get the idea out first, and then from there edit as necessary, adding more, ...

[Obviously this isn't directly referring to the Civil War...I'm not sure how much I like this though...] You have peeled me apart. I am the onion peelings, lying unraveled on ...

Bathilda's heart beat a little too fast as she rode up the driveway to the High Academy of Sulusia, the most prestigious school in Amandil. Maybe make it more obvious ...