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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Melding - Chapter Four Part 2

    Hey! So first of all, this is really good. Just a few things I wanted to mention. ''Deciding not the glance back'' This didn't really make sense to me, and ...

    Aug 17, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Science Fiction Re: Taste of Life - Chapter 4

    This chapter is great! You are a really talented writer, but maybe you shouldn't use abbreviations such as 'I've'nt''. Abbreviations like this get so many people confused (people including me) ...

    Aug 17, 2015


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