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I am thinking about entering this poem in a poetry competition. I was just wondering if you had any further advice for me or how I could improve my poem ...

alleycat13: thanks so much, I will make that change. I understand what you mean about making it rhyme a bit more but I was trying to go for the free ...

W1ldF1r3: thanks so much! I changed the first verse so in the poem it is a branch the whole time, I agree it didn't really link before but hopefully it ...