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This was intriguing from the start. I found my face moving closer to the computer screen in anticipation of what would happen next. This is absolutely beautiful. I don't know ...

Hey! I just want to say thanks for the reviews, I appreciate them. Also, I don't know if you meant your questions to be rhetorical, but I feel the need ...

Thank you! The formatting was this thing's fault, I had it in four line stanzas :/ The second line was supposed to express the narrator's emptiness before they were reunited ...

Thank you Nick! For a short poem, this sure was a long review :) I understand your points about rhythm. Usually, I try to edit it until it flows in ...

Great description of this woman! It creates a desire to meet her or see her. I love that it's so descriptive and I could visualize everything easily. The images were ...

Thank you for your honesty, I really appreciate it! I do like my poems to rhyme but I understand now that if you choose to rhyme you have to mean ...