beccanadon

I really loved this. I'm going through a bunch of poems reviewing them and this one stands out from the rest. The style is so clear, mint, fresh. I feel ...

Diction was excellent for this poem. The harsh words set the tone for being "broken". I wish that you would have stayed with the angel aspect and tied in some ...

This is such a funny poem! I haven't ever read poetry so light and humorous. Thanks for the laugh! On another note, this poem could do with some editing to ...

I like the imagery in this poem! I pictured everything in soft, light tones. The feminine undertone was displayed through the poem until mention of the game. A game brings ...