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Re: blahhhh
Hi!! You had a very interesting opening and that made me really want to read more. You need to make this longer though.
Sep 18, 2009 -
Re: About a Mill Girl
Thanks a lot from all your comments. I will revise it and put the new one up as soon as possible. Have a great summer break!
Jun 27, 2009 -
Re: About a Mill Girl
Thanks
Mar 22, 2009 -
Re: Prolouge
Wow!! Great start. But I suggest that you make longer. Maybe 100 words
Mar 18, 2009 -
Re: Fireworks for the War (Edited)
Wow great job!
Jan 8, 2009