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Hello dragnet! Great story! I actually loved it. Your story was well written but you do have some mistakes. Wanting to get rid of us because we didn’t bend over ...

Hello there! I thought your story was great. Don't you think this is more of a romance than fantasy? Anyway, you didn't have so much mistakes. There were some though, ...

Hello nixonblitzen. I like this story. I didn't find so much mistakes, except -- "Bridget drew little hearts next to him name" Isn't it supposed to be 'his'? Anyway, it ...

Hello there! Well let's see, your friend here has a great story. I like the way she explained how she got her powers one by one. You've got typos here ...