barefootrunner

Hey elysian! Sorry I didn't reply earlier. Thank you so much for the review! I really appreciate the feedback on my writing. Thanks for alerting me to the abrupt ending ...

Hey Mea! Thank you so much for such a kind and constructive review! It was so helpful and gave me a lot of food for thought. You're so right about ...

Hmmm, it is very hard for me to explain how to write without adjectives, as this is part of what makes poetry an artform... It's the kind of thing one ...

I just want to say that this is pure genius. Absolute gold.

Heya! Thanks for such a thorough and caring review! Your critique is so helpful and I'll certainly use it to edit the story when I do so. You're right, this ...

I most certainly will. :) No use critiquing plot if you've only read the first chapter, right? Besides, I'm keen to find out more about this story!

It's always great to get a reply on a review! I think there's a thread stuck away somewhere on YWS for poems you want to post, but don't want reviews ...

Awesome! I'm looking forward to seeing more of you!

I'll keep reading as long as you keep writing! And if you like, I'll even spam your walls if you start slowing down! :D

You're not terrible! You just need to figure out how you're going to adjust your writing style for action scenes. It's a long process :)

Hi there and welcome to YWS! It's good to see you're getting active already :) I think this post would actually do better and get more comments if you posted ...

Sure! Just don't kill your semis entirely, because they're unique to your writing :) It's quite refreshing!

:) Great!

I'll get to it as soon as possible :)

Great pleasure! Let me know when the next chapter comes out :D