bambibeckett

Hey there! This poem evoked strange emotions, and I wasn't sure from where. I finished reading it with more questions than answers which to me is a good thing in ...

An interesting story! When Lucia started crying after her father got stabbed, I thought you may make her tears cure her father since Phoenix tears are associated with healing ability ...

Before I saw your comment below, I was thinking, "This should be in a rap battle." Haha. I'm not mad about it. Love the last paragraph!

For sure! I went ahead and added an author note at the top so people understand why its maybe not as detailed as one would expect. Your feedback helped though! ...

Hey Creeper! Thanks for your feedback! I love how you presented it, so fun :) I'm so glad you enjoyed reading the story. Look forward to seeing you around here ...

Hi Alice! It's great to see where people are getting hung up. I will definitely be looking at how I could write this differently to make Lilith's motives for raising ...

Hey Messy! Thanks for the feedback! I like D&D but haven't seen that one so that's cool that it feels similar. So, this short story was written for a personal ...