babygiggles

Hey there DragonNextec, Well for a first time song writer and cause i have no real experience on song writing i just say what i liked and hated about it ...

Again thanks for being straight forward and i'm sorry i don't understand what you are saying about the alphabet was that a grade mark or something else

Good advice :)

Thanks Kev. I read people's stories on here and i was a little inmidated and nervous at the same time.

thanks i like how you don't hold back and yeah, i know it's not perfect but you never know unless you try so thanks.

I liked it.Because it was very heartfelt and kept me interested to see how it would play out.