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thanks so much! That's totally what I'm going for here. Addictions are a nasty thing but I love to write about people with them for some odd reason. I think ...

Okay, I noticed a few minor things here. My computer is acting up, so I didn't get to finish anything except reading it. Other than what I've pointed out and ...

thanks for the reviews! Sorry, I'm really trying to keep the main issues at hand in Dom's life a bit on the quiet side. Chapter four or five is when ...

Thank you so much for taking the time to review me! I know the "And" is against the rules, but I like the way it sounded with the first three ...

I agree with scribblingquill, I loved this! I can tell you love to write. I admire your imagery here, too, I could picture everything in my head! Wow. All I ...

I found this piece very interesting. In a way it reminds me of Edgar Alan Poe, simply because of how eerie and dark it is. I thought it was poetic, ...

It was hilarious! They should spoof Twilight like they do on the Scary Movie series, Superhero Movie and all of those. Frickin' Great!

Great piece! I was captivated right at the beginning. You described the rain and the storms beautifully, so.