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Hi, I'm intrigued! I like your writing style, it's short and concise. You're very stingy with your details (this is a compliment) and it keeps me scouring through the passage ...

Thanks for reviewing, I'll fix up the face expression detail!

Lol, is his other friends other sperm? This was an interesting spin. I think other people already pointed out any grammar errors, so I'm just going to look on!

Hey! J.K. I read that last part over again and it makes sense. Just forget I wrote that above. Well, not the comments since they were deserved.

Okay, it's been a long time in coming, but here it is. The first message/motif we come upon is the difference in how a child views his world and how ...

This was such a mind blower. Amazingly done!