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Re: The Villain's Hero (prologue)
Heyy :) Im just gonna do a quick review for this piece ( dont expect much- i am an awful reviewer xDD ) I REALLY love it! There is the ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: [September Contest] Pluto
I love your style of writing- very relaxed, and humourous. The main character is very likeable, and easy to relate to. Maybe there could be more description on how he ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: Death Loves the Shadows
This was quite a gripping piece, which had the perfect mixture of description and information :) I didnt really notice many grammar mistakes or anything, but i guess i was ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: Miracles (For Yuriiko's Postsecret Contest)
I really liked this piece! It had great description and overall feel- but a VERY sad ending. This is tne only nitpick i could be bothered to post: You were ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: Love, The Boy Above...
Thats a really cute letter :) I also love the idea of letter sent from heaven- this piece really gives a twist on that classic idea :) Its very beautiful, ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: Phoenix: The Fire Bird (Contest Entry)
WOWOWOWOWOWOWWW :O I loved this story!! I couldnt stop reading it, and finished in 5 minutes! There was great description, and vocabulary etc etc :) But the plot was also ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: Kicking Like There's No Tomorrow
This is really impressive! I was gripped throughout and I loved the story line. You could make it go further, but to be honest, i love it as a short ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: Empty Sky
Hey :)) I am quite new to this website, and I am really impressed by the quality of the work here! This story really grabbed me, and I really hope ...
Nov 6, 2010 -
Re: Changing World
Hey :) This is a really amazing piece of writing! I really enjoyed reading it! The only thing I noticed was this: "Glum, I went to my charging deck, Uncle ...
Nov 6, 2010 -
Re: Death Song
Great read, i really enjoyed it- once it got going :) I agree with captain.classy- maybe you could spread that big lot of information around a bit...? Its a bit ...
Nov 6, 2010
