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  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: The Villain's Hero (prologue)

    Heyy :) Im just gonna do a quick review for this piece ( dont expect much- i am an awful reviewer xDD ) I REALLY love it! There is the ...

    Nov 7, 2010
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: [September Contest] Pluto

    I love your style of writing- very relaxed, and humourous. The main character is very likeable, and easy to relate to. Maybe there could be more description on how he ...

    Nov 7, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Death Loves the Shadows

    This was quite a gripping piece, which had the perfect mixture of description and information :) I didnt really notice many grammar mistakes or anything, but i guess i was ...

    Nov 7, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Miracles (For Yuriiko's Postsecret Contest)

    I really liked this piece! It had great description and overall feel- but a VERY sad ending. This is tne only nitpick i could be bothered to post: You were ...

    Nov 7, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Love, The Boy Above...

    Thats a really cute letter :) I also love the idea of letter sent from heaven- this piece really gives a twist on that classic idea :) Its very beautiful, ...

    Nov 7, 2010
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Phoenix: The Fire Bird (Contest Entry)

    WOWOWOWOWOWOWWW :O I loved this story!! I couldnt stop reading it, and finished in 5 minutes! There was great description, and vocabulary etc etc :) But the plot was also ...

    Nov 7, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Kicking Like There's No Tomorrow

    This is really impressive! I was gripped throughout and I loved the story line. You could make it go further, but to be honest, i love it as a short ...

    Nov 7, 2010
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Empty Sky

    Hey :)) I am quite new to this website, and I am really impressed by the quality of the work here! This story really grabbed me, and I really hope ...

    Nov 6, 2010
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Changing World

    Hey :) This is a really amazing piece of writing! I really enjoyed reading it! The only thing I noticed was this: "Glum, I went to my charging deck, Uncle ...

    Nov 6, 2010
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Death Song

    Great read, i really enjoyed it- once it got going :) I agree with captain.classy- maybe you could spread that big lot of information around a bit...? Its a bit ...

    Nov 6, 2010


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