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Re: The Magi {Ch. 1}
Haha! I havent actually read this, but you used the name Ava, which is my name, so I love it :D That makes me sounds really big headed... But its ...
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: the changer
Hey there :D Im a just going to add some paragraphs, punctuation to your work before I begin actually reviewing :) My changes will be in red. Dear Ellen Taggart, ...
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: Worlds of Serendipity (prologue)
WOOWWW :O I loved this so much! This is exactly the sort of thing I like to read! It completely grabbed my attention, and had the perfect pace too. Your ...
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: Wicked Innocence (NaNo 2010) Chapter 2
Hey, back again :D Here I go xD Nitpicks mean only for me. meant* so I looked around , slowly getting off the log. commaaa :D It That probably wasn’t ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Wicked Innocence (NaNo 2010) Chapter 1
Heyy :) I really like this piece! but im just going to spot out some nitpicks :D God, I always hated my life. To me, that doesnt sound right. I ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Breathe Again...
Hello, here is the review :D suggestions will be in bold Reading, weaving Moving out of my recession Back into the slipstream The twisted world I’m not ready to give ...
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Deleted
Hello :D Im just gonna do a quick review, wring in bold is corrections and writing in red is suggestions :D Ill also cross out a few unnessecary bits :D ...
Nov 20, 2010 -
Re: Elyse- Ch2
Here I am for Chapter two :D The next few days dragged on at an impossibly slow rate. Mom seemed to show up at the house more often (maybe it ...
Nov 12, 2010 -
Re: Elyse- Chapter 1
Hey BlackSheep! I just came to look at your profile, and I saw that you have written this novel! I thought since you had donated so much time to my ...
Nov 11, 2010 -
Re: Gold to Nothingness
Hey :) I loved this piece, very thoughtful, with beautiful metaphors and description :) This is my review, sugegstions are in bold... Angela sighed. She sat in a coffee shop, ...
Nov 11, 2010 -
Re: If Only They Had Read the Instructions
Hey :) I am going to review your story now... obviously xD Sorry, ill start now :) comments and correction will be done in bold. all ideas are just suggestions ...
Nov 10, 2010 -
Re: What You're Missing
WOWOWOWOWWWW :O This is an amazing piece of writing!! The description was wonderful, and I loved the idea (although ive seen it before, i like your spin on it ) ...
Nov 10, 2010 -
Re: My heart in your hands.
I loved this poem! Its really sweet, yet kinda sinister... in a way o.o I enjoyed reading it and although i dont know the hidden meaning, i can see that ...
Nov 9, 2010 -
Re: Bliss: the Chronicles of Charlie and Logan part 2 (edited)
Once again, a great piece of writing :D I really enjoyed it :) Kepp writing please! -Ava
Nov 9, 2010 -
Re: Hayden Dylan
Hey :) This is a very good piece of writing- i enjoyed reading it alot! any words i put in bold are just suggestions... im pretty sure you are a ...
Nov 9, 2010