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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: Dreamer - Chapter 4

    [i]Laughing…. But it wasn’t at me. I was sitting on the other side of a see-saw. I’m nine years old. I had real friends back then, and they all thought ...

    Jul 7, 2010

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General
    Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever: Ch.8

    So I've only just realized that I hadn't reviewed this yet, let alone reviewed it, which is a cause of gaspness in itself, really. Anyway, it's pointless being nitty gritty, ...

    Jun 29, 2010

  • Article / Essay » Review, General
    Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read

    I've got a few books that are my worst ever read. Heart of Darkness by Joseph Conrad - a boring load of drivel about a man trying to sound metaphorical ...

    Jun 28, 2010

  • Article / Essay » Review, General
    Re: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse

    I like the books, bar Breaking Dawn. I always have. I must admit, and one stage (just after they announced that the film rights had been picked up, back in ...

    Jun 28, 2010

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: A Crying Flower

    To be completely fair, I'm horrible at poetry, so I can't nit pick or tell you about verses and lines and all that stuff that is in-depth and stuff. This ...

    Jun 14, 2010

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: Dreamer - Chapter 3

    Never happened. My father died from pancreatic cancer when I was ten. I'm not sure I like the abruptness of this sentence, if that makes sense. 'Never happened' just sounds ...

    Jun 14, 2010

  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General
    Re: Becky

    My parents’ efforts and pocket change will only be wasted. I suggest just using money here. Pocket change sounds very out of place. I understand that you are using it ...

    Jun 13, 2010

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: The Runaway (Chapter2)

    Hmmm... I think John has an ulterior motive for marrying Sabrina! He wants to marry her so quickly...well, he could just be the jealous type! I love that his personality ...

    Jun 13, 2010

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: The Runaway (Chapter1.2)

    Once again, very well done!! I am really liking this story. I'm intrigued to see which way it heads off to, though I think I have a bit of an ...

    Jun 13, 2010

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: The Runaway (Chapter1.1)

    I thought I'd read a couple of your things since you reviewed so nicely on mine!!! Well, I thoroughly enjoyed this. You kept a good pace, so things weren't rushed ...

    Jun 13, 2010

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: deleted.

    I agree with Jasmine. It would be plagarism to use it as the prologue as your book. However, you can use it as a starting quote on the first couple ...

    Jun 7, 2010

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: Dreamer - Chapter 1

    Hi Jane!! This is quite good. You have a lot of potential here with this story, but I feel there are a few things you could work on. You've got ...

    Jun 7, 2010

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Prologue - The Stray Flame (18+ for language)

    Max was not even a footstep behind her, holding her notebook. Had she really left it on the bench. She snatched it out of his hand and cradled it to ...

    Jun 4, 2010

  • Short Story » Romantic, General
    Re: Hemlock

    I really enjoyed this!! I can't really say a lot, cos otherwise I'd just be repeating what everyone else has been saying. One thing I am a tad confused about ...

    Jun 4, 2010

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: deleted

    This is good, so far. I enjoyed it. It's the right length for a prologue, not too short but not too long. Just a few things though to nitpick and ...

    May 30, 2010


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