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Re: Whats in your way?
Poetry! Yay! Makes me happy. Thank you for sharing this piece of you with the world. Let's get into it! This is a pleasing poem to the eye, in my ...
Feb 22, 2017 -
Re: The Boy is Back
Hi there, fellow poet, and welcome to YWS! Remember that any suggestions I give are purely opinion-- poetry is so subjective it's hard to critique. Nevertheless, I'll begin: I like ...
Feb 21, 2017 -
Re: Food Whispers
Good evening, fellow poet! My name is Abigail and I am happy to give you some comments on your work! Any suggestions I give are purely opinionated. Poetry is so ...
Feb 21, 2017 -
Re: the first time i felt my mouth go numb.
FELLOW POET Good evening. Let me commend you on a few accounts, and also give you some suggestions for further growth. Keep in mind these are all opinions of mine ...
Feb 21, 2017