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Thank you so much, wayward! Typically a review is posted in order to provide friendly critiques and praise for a writer looking to improve a piece. I do very much ...

Hi Ashlyn! Thank you so much for the review and kind words. I really appriciate it. I can do some brainstorming when I revise to see if I can find ...

manilla oh my goodness! thank you so much for the incredible compliment

Hi ramenaissance! Thank you so much for the comment! Could you elaborate on what you mean by %u201CI think better words could%u2019ve been chosen?%u201D I%u2019d love to hear your suggestions!

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I feel like a piece like this doesn't warrant any type of review, but I did want to let you know that I am so sorry for your loss. Suicide, ...

thank you so much! i was diagnosed with tourettes about a year ago, so this issue is one i hold very close to me, and i'm sure you do as ...

alliyah, thank you so much for the wonderful review! I definitely agree that there are a few a few logistical issues with the story behind this poem, as well as ...

Woah! This was from so long ago, and I just got a notification! Weird... Anyway, the little bit about the pen and paper is what starts the discussion about Becca, ...

1nspire, Thank you for the kind words! This is actually one of the older pieces that I've published here on YWS, but it's nice to know people are still checking ...

Manilla, Thank you so much for the awesome review! I really appreciate the tip about the dialogue. It is a bit congested, so I think I'll take your advice and ...

Thank you so much for the review, Munozutoo2122! I appreciate the kind words. :)

Jade, Thank you so much for the review and the kind words! You say the plot dragged, could you give me an example of where? Sending you a (late) welcome ...

SunsetTree, Thank you for the review! I really appreciate the advice! :)

Thank you, Ollie, I'm delighted to hear you like it!