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  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Naive Cinderella

    Thanks for your review, I really appreciate it! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

    Jun 2, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Naive Cinderella

    Thanks for the review and the tip on punctuation!

    Jun 2, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Naive Cinderella

    Thanks for your review! I will definitely work on structure and flow. I totally see what you are saying there about some lines being too short. I glad you liked ...

    Jun 2, 2015


Owning our story can be hard but not nearly as difficult as spending our lives running from it. Embracing our vulnerabilities is risky but not nearly as dangerous as giving up on love and belonging and joy—the experiences that make us the most vulnerable. Only when we are brave enough to explore the darkness will we discover the infinite power of our light.
— Brené Brown