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  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Books for Boys

    he he, My name is Hannah too! XD Thanks for the review!

    Mon Mar 02, 2009 6:42 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: S.P. 0.2

    Thank you for the reviews guys! It helped heaps!

    Mon Mar 02, 2009 8:26 am
  • Script » General, General Re: Clueless Cabby

    I couldn't find anything wrong with it! Good work!

    Mon Mar 02, 2009 3:10 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: S.P. 0.2

    Hi, part 3 is now up...

    Sat Feb 28, 2009 10:56 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: S.P. 0.1

    Hi! Thank you for the reviews. The next 2 parts are up, they should be near the top of the forum!

    Sat Feb 28, 2009 10:55 pm
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Stairs

    he he, I love it! The atmosphere is awesome! I like the short sentences and the repeating... normally it would do my head in, but you pull it off perfectly!

    Sat Feb 28, 2009 8:29 pm
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Books for Boys

    Okay. Thanking you, yrclever! The post is now updated... Man, I had a lot of grammar, spelling mistakes in there!

    Sat Feb 28, 2009 8:22 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Split personalities 0.1

    Hi, Thak you for all of the reviews. I have made most of the changes in the re-write, and it is posted here and here . Reviews are wecome... Thank ...

    Sat Feb 28, 2009 3:14 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: S.P. 0.1

    Yeah... Those were things I was a bit shy about myself... I guess I have to go back and fix them now.Thank you XxxDo

    Thu Feb 26, 2009 6:08 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Split personalities 2.1

    Thank you for the reviews! I will edit it soon!

    Thu Feb 26, 2009 6:23 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: S.P. 0.1

    Thank you, you guys. The reviews were helpfull. I am currently re=editing my novel/story, so you can read the old chapters now. Just look at my portfolio, and it's called ...

    Wed Feb 25, 2009 5:27 am
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Phobia Phobia Phobia

    You have a fear of Friday the 13th? How dare you? DO NOT SUCCUMB TO PETTY SUPERSTITIONS!

    Tue Feb 24, 2009 6:14 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: S.P. 1.2

    Haha, Lol,, she is an enhanced human... or something of the like. Thanks dfor the reviews!

    Tue Feb 24, 2009 6:45 am
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Her First Mistake: Part 1

    Hehe, I just thought I might put this in here!

    Tue Feb 24, 2009 6:36 am
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Writing about writing

    Hey! Thanks you two. I will fix it up... now. I couldn't be bothered going back and editing last night, so I will do now!

    Mon Feb 23, 2009 7:27 pm


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