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Just 'cause it's critically acclaimed doesn't make it good... Yes... exactly! I want a good critically acclaimed book to read... not one that sucks but I have to force myself ...

Hello, Thank you for replying to my 'will review for food' thread. I'm just going to do as best as I can, as it is Easter Friday, and I have ...

haha! that was funny! keep writing!

Okay... back for round two! He scoffs and she regrets the question almost immediately. She thinks: we should already be there. She thinks: it never takes me this long to ...

Hmmm... I think that you have a good poem here. I think that you have a bit of a weird ending though. The repetition of 'old' doesn't fit there. I ...

OMG! Make this a book... and I will buy it! Seriously... I don't care if I've already read it! Great work!

OKay... sorry! I wasn't exactly meaning blood and guts literally. I meant it as an action type of thing! Sorry!

Thank you so much... I have terrible grammar! I have a really bad problem with semi-colons as well! Thank you!

Thank you! That did help a lot! (P.S: I'm not a good as writer as you, Pippiedooda)

Hi! The main post has been edited... Thank you for all of your reviews everybody!

Hi! I have re-edited the chapter segment, and it is now changed... Thanks for the reviews!

Thatnks sakura! It helped!

Thanks hippie! I never thought about having it in the past... Well, I guess that's what you're here for!

The blood goes everywhere because she is running, blood pumping and all that. aslo, if you read that parts one after the other they have *** inbetween them... I wasn't ...

Hi! Thank you for the review, Pippiedooda! The main post is now updated.