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Re: dirty knees, cloudy skies
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Re: dirty knees, cloudy skies
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Sep 21, 2015 -
Re: Fallen
And yes my main characters secret desire is to become a ballerina. But wow the all-powerful author will not allow him to continue his dream
Sep 21, 2015 -
Re: Fallen
Thanks!
Sep 21, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 1.1
Thanks I'll make those changes now
Sep 21, 2015 -
Re: Fallen
I can't wait to change all the mistakes. It is my first work and I am so happy you guys read it. It makes me feel good. I'm glad you ...
Sep 21, 2015 -
Re: Fallen
Should I republish it in parts?
Sep 21, 2015 -
Re: Fallen
Thanks so much
Sep 21, 2015 -
Re: Fallen
Thank you so much!
Sep 21, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 2, Part 1 (Untitled)
It just got really dark I like it though
Sep 21, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 1.1: Nice To Meet You
I just want to say that the whole taking her home happened really fast. If it happened slower it would have seemed like he was bad at it, the way ...
Sep 21, 2015 -
Re: Bang
I really like it, though it was kind of dark and made me sad. I would have added more characterisation and getting to know them, but otherwise it was good
Sep 19, 2015