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Gosh, I am always a step behind everyone in correcting your stories...Grr...Jeeze... But anyway this is the "chapter eight" review. :D lol Wow…very sad. So Melody is going to die? ...

KJ : You are such a pal! :D What would I do without you! lol And I will talk to my mom about staying at your aunt and uncles for ...

Night Mistress : Of course I will PM you when I post the next chapter. :D And yes, Isaac and Sophia are getting deep :wink: Ah..DUH! Obviously you can send ...

sasquash : Thanks so much! :D I promise to try to answer a least a few questions. But I don't want to give them all away because then I don't ...

Scasha, this is the seventh chapter review. As usual, this was good! :D Full of excitement. Very suspenseful. I would have liked to see more of the battle between Melody ...

Writing for love is a pas I'm glad you like it so much! :D And thank you so much for the compliments. Yeah, hopefully I will finish this! Hopefully...:wink: lol ...

To everyone Same as Part one, I edited as much as I could, adding more depth to my MC and everything else. Also, more detail is present and more emotions ...

To everyone : I have changed all that I could with this, adding more detail and thought to my MC. Also, I added an additional paragraph, to add more to ...

Veracelle : Umm....okay?? I just want to let you know that my story is NOTHING like Stephanie Meyer's stuff. Also, what right do you have to tell people that it ...

Esme, Esme, Esme Are you always so helpful?? Gosh, thanks so much! :wink: I know, I will really work on expanding this. I wrote this scene kind of fast because ...

day tripper and Alarainya I'm sorry you guys didn't like this chapter as much...but if I made it any longer, it would have bugged people. Also, I wanted it to ...

Alarainya Thanks so much! :D I know, I have had a lot of comments about that. I will be sure to change it.

Iya Ythmir : Thanks so much! :D I will make the corrections as soon as I can!

Scasha : Hey! :D Yeah, I know. I'm not used to writing stories in third person, so this is a change for me. Normally, I write in first person, so ...

dianis97 : Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it! :D Moriah Leila : I'm glad you like this too. Thanks so much for the corrections. I will make them ...