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Loyal YWS Readers and Review-ers : I want to thank you all for all the support on this chapter. I decided to change it a bit because I know that ...

Dudette : Wow, thanks! :D I'm glad you liked this so much. I actually got the idea from the book Evermore :oops: which has people with auras which the girl ...

frozencyberspace : Your comment was amazing! It helped me so much. This is kind of a new style I'm trying, switching POV's and such. Hopefully I can continue to master ...

Angel, lucy, Sunny, and Sela : I must thank you all for the support and the help. Sela, you were so honest, it was lovely! :D Sunny, you are always ...

Sunny, Lucy, Angel, KJ : Wow, you guys are A-MA-ZZZINNNGG! I love your upbeat comments and I Love how you guys give me criticism. I really hope that I can ...

Sunny, Lucy, and Angel : You guys are so great. Every chapter I post, you are all three here for me, ready to review. I always thank you guys and ...

KJ : I know, I'm really trying. I know I told you today that I might not continue to write and I've decided to just take a break, really concentrate ...

'Kay, back to finish the rest :wink: To the right, and old squishy sofa sat. 'an' instead of 'and' "So while we're in here," he said, grinning at me and ...

200397, Sela Locke, Meep, Lucyy, and Angel of Death: Wow, I can't believe how detailed you guys became with your reviews. This has been so so very helpful, I just ...

YWS readers : I've done some major editing to this so hopefully this edition is better than the last :wink: Hope you enjoy it! =]

YWS readers : I've done a lot of editing so hopefully this edition of this is way better than the last :wink: Happy reading!

YWS Readers : I've done some switching with ages and some major editing so hopefully this edition is better than the last two :wink:

Angel of Death, Sela Locke, and mizz-iceberg : You guys are so helpful! :D Angel, I'm so glad you enjoy it so much. I am working on all the things ...

Night Mistress, Angel of Death, and mizz-iceberg Thanks to all of you! I really am working on finishing this piece. I love this kind of literature and I hope that ...

YWS Readers : I have added much more to this chapter so it isn't so short and also, I hope that the edited version is much better! Thanks to all ...