ashleylee

This was good! :D JFW and the others seemed to cover everything so I'm not being very helpful right now. But, I will give you an overview of what I ...

I am definetly disappointed in the length. Hmm, I would have loved to see more of this. I agree with mateeah3 that it just happened all too fast. And it ...

This was really good. Filled with emotions and action. Until the end... I'm sort of confused now. Who is Markus?? I thought your main character lost his wife and children?? ...

Omgosh! This was simply crazy! But, wierdly enough, I liked it! You described this insane guy so well. Everything that he said convinced me. I especially liked this line: I ...

Very moving. This story had so much going on. But I liked it. It was REAL. I think I read another one of your stories and it had the same ...

This was really cute! :D I loved it! But I didn't really understand why her world was torn apart by one kiss? Shouldn't it have been romantic and her true ...

Oh, the last installment. Alfred has passed away and his friends our grieving. Such a disappointing ending. I really hoped that Alfred would live through it or miraculously crash the ...

Umm, all I have to ask is WHY?? Why is Alfred going to die?? Wow, I am so sad...:cry: Still, I did like the continuation of the story. It just ...

Hello again! Gosh, I really do enjoy this story! It has all the elements: joy, heartbreak, renewal. It seems that everything is coming together for Alfred. Which makes me smile! ...

Hey Conrad, I really enjoyed this story. Kiss basically corrected everything so I guess I'll just have to give you my overall opinion :wink: This was such a very up-lifting ...

Hey Scasha! Again, your work is inspiring! I love reading this story! :wink: Well, I only have a few things to point out. I sighed. Like he told me before, ...

Hello! I must say that I liked this chapter more than your first one. I think that is because I felt this chapter was more personal. Okay, well, I only ...

Hi! All I did was copy/paste your story. All my suggested corrections are in bold! So...here I go: I’m sitting here writing this freakin letter and there’s really no point. ...

Hello, Gahks...I don't think we have met before... This, I guess, will be my first review of your work so, here I go! [all I did was copy/paste your story ...

Simply Enriching! :D Your language is beautiful and all your imagery is divine! Everything was so REAL! So lifelike that I fell in love with the story by the second ...