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Angel, I'm back and ready to review! I really enjoy these types of stories so I'm going to hurry and read :wink: hehe All Comments in black, all corrections in ...

Howdy Angel! :D I have been seeing this for awhile and have finally decided to check it out. All Comments in bold, corrections in red. The Jane Effect By Angel ...

King, I couldn't resist coming back to read the second chapter so.... Again, Comments in bold and corrections in red . Chapter 2: Human Though it’s beyond my understanding, Xandra ...

Hey, King. You mentioned another story of yours and I just couldn't resist reading it :wink: All comments in bold, corrections in red. Chapter 1: Cadaver “Where are you taking ...

That is such a sad story, Jasmine. You did it was such intensity, such imagery that I was speechless. It was all so real and horrible. I feel so bad ...

Hey Luc! I'm back and ready to critique! Hope this one is just as helpful as the last one :wink: And I'm afraid it won't be because I found absolutely ...

This was such an adorable idea! I agree with olivia that it was refreshing to find something with morals! :D lol I felt that the emotions you had were very ...

Yup, I agree with the two above comments that I'm pretty much addicted to this story. It is similiar to those action flicks that you watch on TV. :wink: hehe ...

Oh no! What happened to April! :? I really liked her character too... This was an amazing chapter, King! I have no complaints. Everything was so easy to follow and ...

I agree with you, King! This was the most enjoyable chapter for me so far. I love the new addition you made to it. April was such a personal character. ...

Yes, this chapter was depressing, but I felt necessary. You had to descripe the solemn tone of her relationship between her father and herself before you could move on. I ...

Hey, jasmine! Here I am again, reading your unbelievably good story. I know, I dont' have a life on the weekends either lol :wink: My name was scrawled in the ...

Yeah, King, I liked this chapter. It was so heartfelt at the end. Very cute! :D I would never would have guessed at an abusive father. That was a total ...

Howdy, Icaruss. You know how much I like your work so I couldn't resist when I saw this post. :wink: You’re an asshole. Edward shrugs and tries to listen to ...

Chapter Thirteen!!! Yay!!! *jumps up and down excitedly* I sighed and started pulling at my sweater. “They say that by the time he is middle aged, his brain will work ...