ashleylee

Okay, mI had the first three chapters up, but I was told it was a bit too much, so I will revise and when it seems good, i will post ...

I need this reviewed because it is a contest entry at my school and I dont trust my teacher :D You got it, playerj! I'm ready to review! :D Anne ...

Wow, this chapter was SO SO SO good, Jazz! :D I loved every minute of it from the video game to the kissing to Nigel, ah, so good :D :D ...

'Ello, Angel! I reread the ending of Chapter 8.1 and I see that you have changed the ending. I like that one a lot better, just so you know :wink: ...

I'm back, Happy! :D 'Mei!' shrieked Jia angrily to her sister, as she stormed in on the girl, who sat cross-legged on the floor tiles reading. I thought "Mei" was ...

Hey, Happy! Here and ready to review! :D Her dark brown eyes looked penetrated her blushing sister inquisitively. Oddly worded. Try instead: Her dark brown eyes penetrated her blushing sister ...

Hey, I'm the first one to review! Hope this helps! He reached out for my chest but I walked right through him instead, getting that tingly feeling you get when ...

Hello, ATreeah. Saw your profile and decided to read some of your work. Hopefully this helps :wink: Its a small prologue but i hope you enjoy it. Destiny Entwines Prologue ...

Last Chapter! :D I finished looking at them all in one day. Proud of me? :wink: hehe jk “Honey, what are you thinking about?” Mom asked me. I jumped, looked ...

Chapter Four review is up and ready to go :wink: When I was normal, when I had friends and spoke up during class, when my life hadn’t been changed by ...

Chapter Three review coming right up :wink: Pleasant View High had about hundred kids in each grade. Each class was mostly a combination of all of them. They had freshmen ...

Hey, Kels! :D All I did was copy/paste your story and I all my comments are in bold, corrections in red . The way it all began was pretty fuzzy ...

In the beginning, this was kind of choppy but now I know what you were talking about with Jessica freaking out. That is a really cool gift she has. I'm ...

Okay, this chapter I found to be kind of confusing. Don't get me wrong, it was as good as all the others, but I have some questions. 1. In the ...

I see you made Gemma's emotions more known. Very nice :D Well, I'm sorry my reviews aren't long enough. I'm guessing Chapter Twenty is the chapter I haven't read....right? Well, ...