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I rolled my tired body to the right and clicked my phone off; that was on my nightstand. No need for a semicolon after "off" “Huh.” As I sighed out ...

Hey, Merry. I know you mentioned something about needing reviews on this so I decided to swing by and take a peek :wink: hehe Without letting Andrew concluding what he ...

I understood this completely. She's mad because her and her brother are no longer close since she has moved off to college and she feels alone and exiled, right? I ...

Hey, Bri. I'm sorry that I've neglected your work like I have. Hopefully this critique makes up for it :wink: Preface I watched on as my younger sister [s]stolen[/s] stole ...

This was a good start :D I liked the realness factor that you have with your characters. They are all easily kids you can relate to at your own school. ...

Hey, KJ! Another chapter, hmm? I couldn't resist coming to check it out :wink: Finally, after along pause, he spoke. "After a long pause" That's the only thing I found ...

Hello, Spike! I got your message, and here I am, at your request :wink: Hope this helps! Such were the conditions for our poor 14 year old character. Write out ...

‘Ello, pshhxhoney! I have returned to do another review :D hehe We were in the kitchen, he was looking through our cabinets for something and I saw sitting down watching ...

Hey, pshhxhoney! I apologize in being so slow in getting to this. Hopefully this review helps! :D “I didn’t think of that. I really don’t know. Maybe I can climb ...

Hey, Sorsha! :D Sorry it took me so long to get to this. I’ve just been so busy with everything… but anyway, hopefully this review helps! “Either you choose to ...

Hola, Angel! I'm on a role here, trying to catch up on all the reviewing on behind on. Hopefully this helps :D I had not been able to go to ...

Angel, I'm back! Gosh, I feel like I have been away from YWS for an eternity (more like three weeks) but yeah :wink: Hopefully this review helps! Painting that used ...

Aredia, you have no idea how long I have been waiting for this next part. And wow, you did not disappoint! :D Another wonderful chapter. Your characters are all so ...

Yes, very cute, Angel :D I hope they all enjoy this. I thought it was an adorable quirk with a hint of humor. Love it :D *gives gold star*

Oh, Melkor, I can just sense this is going to be another one of your masterpieces. I read the critiques before I started on the story, and I must say, ...