ashjoy7

This reminded me sort of a movie I just watched, um, "Somthing Borrowed" I think. This kind of love is the kind where if you love the person you love ...

I can relate to your poem. When I was younger, from preschool right up to the brink of middle school, I was a spaz. Life was fun and I didn't ...

If you've never heard "Pictures at an Exhibition" by Mussorgsky, I'd definitely recommend it for inspiration. It is a classical piece which some people don't respond to well, but classical ...

Holy cow! This was good, real good. A piece like this flows, it's got a very significant theme, and it's got a irony. I have only a few suggestions, most ...

Overall I liked this piece. I thought the characters were clear and they had interesting personalities. I get what you're trying to do, and writing with a purpose is probably ...

Dang. That was pretty epic. The whole thing had a heavy, mysterious, melancholy, almost revengeful tone. I kind of feel the need for this story to continue on. Are you ...

I really like your writing style. You have great description and use vivid imagery to get across a mental image. The begining was great, I liked how it was a ...

Haunted houses and dares are a little overdone, but you managed to make it interesting. I agree that you sounded a little like you moved from ghost stories to environmental ...

Creepy much. That was great. I like the whole demon thing. I like how the main character is tough but also is weak (the retching at the end, hates killing ...

I have one question. What happened to make two "dignified teachers" get so grrrrr. Were they fighting over somthing, or someone? I guess the title kind of helps in that ...

Your writing is very detailed. I kind of got confused though. You didn't really explain what happened to the main character. Only one sentence described how they died, and then ...

Good characterization! I already know a ton about Reece and Alissa's relationship. I liked the flashback too, it was put in the perfect place. I could almost see it in ...