ash4ever15

i really like the voice of this piece it kept me enticed all the way through as well at the style you wrote it. my only critique would be grammatical ...

i really liked this chapter i like that its realistic instead of the usual geeky girl popular guy blah blah blah i also liked the fact that you changed point ...

very good i couldn't stop reading once i started. your very descriptive but not over bearing which is a major plus to your i read each word i fell into ...

wow... this story has alot of feeling behind it . it read really smoothly. you are a wonderful writer. its very clear that you are comfortable with letting your thoughts ...