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i know, the ending felt a bit rough to me too. as for the dialogue and italics, that was just a mistake I made when copy pasting it into the ...

i may have broken your heart, messy :( thank you for the kind words :)

of course!!! best of luck!! :)

thank you so much reaper! i really appreciate the solid feedback. part 1 of chapter 2 is actually posted right now, go check it out :) thank you man!

thank you so much :) i appreciate the solid feedback! part 2 will be up soon!

ignore the other 2 replies, misclicks

this is such a cool story. everybody struggles with a lack of self-esteem and this story captures that perfectly. was the mirror woman really bloody mary? or was it just ...

this is such a cool story. everybody struggles with a lack of self-esteem and this story captures that perfectly. was the mirror woman really bloody mary? or was it just ...

this is such a cool story. everybody struggles with a lack of self-esteem and this story captures that perfectly. was the mirror woman really bloody mary? or was it just ...

that was so sad :( i loved it. i really wanna see a part 2 that shows us what happens in the car accident with the kids grandma, that would ...