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  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: Dead on Arrival, Chapter 2 (final part)

    i know, the ending felt a bit rough to me too. as for the dialogue and italics, that was just a mistake I made when copy pasting it into the ...

    Dec 29, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: Dead on Arrival, Chapter 2 (part 1)

    i may have broken your heart, messy :( thank you for the kind words :)

    Dec 29, 2024
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Humor Re: ctrl + a

    of course!!! best of luck!! :)

    Dec 29, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Dead on Arrival, Chapter 1

    thank you so much reaper! i really appreciate the solid feedback. part 1 of chapter 2 is actually posted right now, go check it out :) thank you man!

    Dec 28, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Dead on Arrival, Chapter 1

    thank you so much :) i appreciate the solid feedback! part 2 will be up soon!

    Dec 24, 2024
  • Short Story » Realistic, Supernatural Re: Mirror

    ignore the other 2 replies, misclicks

    Dec 24, 2024
  • Short Story » Realistic, Supernatural Re: Mirror

    this is such a cool story. everybody struggles with a lack of self-esteem and this story captures that perfectly. was the mirror woman really bloody mary? or was it just ...

    Dec 24, 2024
  • Short Story » Realistic, Supernatural Re: Mirror

    this is such a cool story. everybody struggles with a lack of self-esteem and this story captures that perfectly. was the mirror woman really bloody mary? or was it just ...

    Dec 24, 2024
  • Short Story » Realistic, Supernatural Re: Mirror

    this is such a cool story. everybody struggles with a lack of self-esteem and this story captures that perfectly. was the mirror woman really bloody mary? or was it just ...

    Dec 24, 2024
  • Short Story » Realistic, Literature Re: Mommy's Wish

    that was so sad :( i loved it. i really wanna see a part 2 that shows us what happens in the car accident with the kids grandma, that would ...

    Dec 24, 2024


Poetry is my cheap means of transportation. By the end of the poem the reader should be in a different place from where he started. I would like him to be slightly disoriented at the end, like I drove him outside of town at night and dropped him off in a cornfield.
— Billy Collins