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Re: Someone at my window
it is so nice :D but try to right a longer one next time ok and make it more realistic em.... i think that's it so wish you luck for ...
Sep 26, 2008 -
Re: The Survivor (Extract 3)
you're storie was great and cool 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) but there were many mistakes chirantha has showed every thing i have to say ...
Sep 3, 2008 -
Re: My Prologue
wow :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o i loved it it gave me the chills great idea but i saw one ...
Sep 2, 2008
