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A car, about 500 miles away , d efinitely to o fast. It's best to just state "Miles," instead of abbreviating with a lowercase M. Secondly, the second sentence should ...

I don't know why people had problems with this. I thought it was brilliant. Of course, I can understand most anything if I put my mind to it. Brilliant work ...

Ill give it another try: A car, about 500m away. Definitely too fast. A girl, walked along the street. "I have to help her!!“ flashed through Patrice's mind, and wanted ...

My teacher isn't giving the poems back! I am so mad right now. I hope he actually looked at them... Really isn't that his job? I submitted the first two ...

Thanks guys. You really helped me. I showed it to a teacher (the first 2) and I am still waiting for his response if its OK for school magazine... Could ...

well that helped... How do you move a story from one genre to the next?

I also love really short sentences. But however my teacher doesn't... I didn't mean what you meant with: The girl should be lower case. I actually had a middle part ...

Thanks for your review. German is one of my main subjects after all. It continues: Patrice stared. Her mouth stood wide open. Her eyes wide with shock. The Girl had ...

OMG... These are so good lyrics. Do you have a melody with them, because when I read them, I could so hear someone singing them. Did you have a reason ...