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Thank you so much. First chapters have always been my weak spot, but hopefully bit by bit It'll get better. I appreciate the time you've taken, and I've been looking ...

If you would like to take a look I have another chapter posted. I'd definitely appreciate the feedback.

Thank you, that was extremely helpful. I need to know what make sense and what doesn't. I have another chapter posted if your expert reviewer wants to take a look, ...

No worries :). And you've brought up a very valid point. While there is a magical underworld realm, the rustlands are in Vermont, USA xD. So I will work on ...

Thank you so much! This is exactly what I needed. I sent it to a friend and she told me I didn't have enough exposition, so I guess I over ...

Thanks. I broke this chapter up because I thought people would get way to bored trying to read the whole thing in one go. Originally this was suppose to be ...

Thanks for reviewing. There is a reason they have the same name, but I'm aware of how confusing it is so I may change it anyway...And thanks, I'm not quite ...

I would just like to say I proof read this 3 times and used spell-checker twice. I can't pick out grammar mistakes. period. And I would never post my work ...

Umm...You are aware that this is fanfiction right? So I kind of assume people know who I'm talking about and Loki's name cannot be changed. I will taking your pacing ...

Your reviews are awesome, and I can totally see where your coming from. I really need to just spiel this story for a bit, but after I'm done with that ...

Hey I liked it, but it was different than I expected. I think what caught my attention the most was that it was part-rhyming and part not rhyming, or rather ...

To both of you. Thank you for your wonderful reviews. I will definitely take all that into consideration, but it may take me a while. The next chapter is a ...

thanks. I was kind of going for cheesy romantic at the beginning there. Originally I had all the flashbacks in italics, so they looked like flashbacks, but I was having ...

sorry for the typo, and thanks so much for the reviews.