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I can't believe there;s only one more part. I want to keep reading. Make sure you keep in the loop on your expansion plans. xD On that, I'm a little ...

Hey sorry it took me so long, but I promise I'm going to see this one through to the end. I loved the way you described her interaction with Hayden. ...

Hey there, let me start with what I love. I like that you made the setting, characters, and situation so clear, but while weaved it naturally into the story. I ...

Hey there. Overall, this was a nice, clean, read. It had nice suspense and flow. Excellent job. That being said, it's a little short. It was nice for reviewing, but ...

Hey it's me again. I was totally thrown off-guard when you mentioned Santa Claus and toys. Seriously, in a story with guns, executions, and the f-word, and it's about Christmas? ...

Hey there. Let me start with what I loved. Your writing style. I loved the way it flowed, the way it sounded. I also loved the characters. I like your ...

It's me again. I thought of a question I should have asked last time. How did they get out of the well? The chapter ended with them in, and then ...

Oh man, these guys are crazy. It's totally got me addicted though. I love how this was structured. Clearly it's a very dark chapter, yet you still had a guy ...

Hey there. I'm pretty sure I read a chapter of this before. Anyway, I loved this. I love the premise of it, and I love the interactions between all the ...

Hey, it's me again. I was so excited when I saw this in the green room. Even though it's been a while, I was able to pick up where I'd ...

Hey there. So this is the second chapter. I haven't read the first, so I can only assume something happened that made her want to leave, or she'd been thinking ...

Hey there, let me start with what I loved. The world, and story. It's new, interesting, and has a nice vibe to it. They're like demon hunters in this place ...

Hey there. Like Rachael said, the enter key is your friend. Maybe you did and YWS messed with your formatting. It does that sometimes. The problem with no paragraphs is ...

Man, I wished I'd read this chapter before chapter 12, it would've made chapter 12 cooler. Ah well, this another nicely paced chapter. Nathaniel's kind of a punk, leaving his ...

Hey there! I know I've red at least one chapter before this, so I'll try not to repeat myself. Overall, this was excellent. It was gripping, intense, and well-paced. The ...