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I think you did a brilliant job. When she slaps him just as the teacher walks back in I was like no!!!! and then when you ended it with the ...

Hey, again. First o fall I was really impressed with this chapter, It might be the best you've done so far(though my reading of them has been so spread out ...

I actually enjoyed this poem. Mostly because this isn't something you would typically find on a teen writing site. You don't really find it in modern literature either. It's obviously ...

Hi there. I liked the poem, but I wasn't inspired by it. Meaning, I didn't absolutely love it. However, I think that your a talented enough writer and this is ...

This was...intriguing. It was a little long but I never got bored, so good job(I get bored with long stories very easily). This is also a very unique piece of ...

Hey, thanks for posting another chapter. Your had some nice elements, but I think it needs a little work. I didn't really get why you put that part at the ...

I liked it. It feels like it should be a part of a novel though, not a short story. You created a lot of questions and answered very few of ...

I aslo loved the story, but I have a few nitpicks that the other didn't mention, at least I hope so, It's possible I missed a few of his/her corrections. ...

Awesome, just one little thing: “I couldn’t see them remember?” Callie said playfully mean. There should be a comma after said or something to that effct so it's not just ...

I liked it. Your writing felt familar and captivating, I enjoyed it. I've always wondered how Harry Potter world would fit in the US, so this was pretty cool. I ...

I liked it, but I thought it was weird. Especially with the whole For she is from Italy, I from Spain I guess it's good though, it was certainly interesting ...

once again very good story. I really like your characters and your setting, another unexpected twist. You did a really good job with creating stuff. I have a few problems ...

I Liked it, it was good, and totally unexpected. when it started I expected it to be another story about Kid-parent relationships and how parents live through their kids etc... ...

You have an amazing writing talent, and as the other said, you use it to create very believable characters and situations. Your writing keeps getting better and better too, I ...

I really liked your writing, I thought it flowed nicely and conveyed the emotion adequately. Their were a few things that were...different, and while I thought you pulled them off ...