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arli021

  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, General Re: Radioactive

    I really like this. Wait . . . that's an understatement . . . I LOVE IT!!!! I honestly don't see anything wrong with this story. At first, I didn't ...

    Feb 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Let's talk about Sex

    I loved the message behind this! The actual poem, I thought was humorous and a good way to get the message across!!!!! Keep Writing!!!!!!!!!!!! -Arli021

    Jan 23, 2014
  • Lyrics » Romantic, General Re: Blank

    Thank you, I really appreciate it. I haven't really thought about becoming a musician. I'm not really sure what I want to become. I dabble in a little guitar and ...

    Jan 23, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic Re: My One and Only

    Just to let you know... a military cut is a type of hairstyle that people usually get in the army or it's just a hairstyle.

    Jan 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic Re: My One and Only

    Thank you for the ideas I wrote another one My One and Only 2

    Jan 4, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: In My Eyes Chapter 2

    Yes I did put a lot of research into the testing

    Nov 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Will: The One I Wish the Best

    thanks for the tips i really appreciate it!

    Nov 10, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: Ditched- Chapter 1/Introduction

    Thanks Hightop, it's not the best writing (defiantly not the best writing more like the worst!) but i thought it could somewhere. I would like to know why you think ...

    Nov 2, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Will: The One I Wish the Best

    Okay, I'm just so glad people like my work. I mean I've been told my writing was good, but I wasn't sure if they were just saying that.

    Aug 28, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Will: The One I Wish the Best

    Hi Umaima! Thank you for commenting on my work. I didn't realize I missed so many things. By the way, the 'Him' thing is supposed to be clear that 'he' ...

    Aug 27, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Slipping Away- Chapter 1

    Actually guys, I think I will actually come up with a name later.

    Jul 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Slipping Away- Chapter 1

    I haven't actually been able to finish this chapter, but once I'm done, I will post more. I'm glad you guys like it and thanks for correcting me. By the ...

    Jul 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Romancing The Devil: Chapter Three

    I like how it's longer and more detailed, but I'm confused. Does Boe stalk Camron or something, because she already knows what car he has? How does Camron know where ...

    Jul 28, 2013


I will call them my people, which were not my people; and her beloved, which was not beloved.
— Romans 9:25