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arif

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: She's Brilliant

    I think the abstraction is a little overkill. But hey, I felt the rage of the speaker. I almost had to stop reading to take a breath!

    Jun 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Spiritual Re: A hiding Nightmare

    I like the idea of "sleep".

    Feb 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Hurt

    I can see why, despite being really short, you still love it. As I do to.

    Jun 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Politics, Politics Re: something to talk about

    I like how you used rhetorical questions and speeches

    Jun 23, 2013


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— Terry Pratchett