arianaSarroyo

This poem is bad I think I'm going t0 take it down. Sorry for the confusion.

I took out the words "alas" and laboring... Do you think it'll make much of a difference?

Thank you. At some point I will work in improving this. :-)

Thanks for the reviews... They were very much appreciated.

Thanks for the reviews... They were very much appreciated.

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Thank you all for the thoughtful comments and advice. I will see about editing it later.

Cute and funny :)

Very nice poetry you have here!