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Re: Revenge [EDITED] please crit. again
Wow. Really interesting how that simple picture made you think of such a plot. The emotions were great and I truly, truly loved this. Umm.. I didn't notice anything wrong ...
Apr 9, 2008 -
Re: FRST THREE PAGES OF MY BOOK CH. 1
Very discriptive! There are a few spelling mistakes. I'm a little bit confused about the story and "his innner beast," but i guess you'll probably explain all that in your ...
Mar 22, 2007
