ardentlyThieving

I'm sorry, my soul has already been drained out of my by my mock exams. Wow yeah, I didn't realize quite how similar Lyn's nickname and Lloyd's actual name is ...

Yeah, I should probably put more in than one line saying that Lloyd is having a bit of trouble walking as it's a little easy to miss.

[user]@BlueAfrica[/user] you asked me to tag u when I update!!

yeah, my mates said "yo describe more n slow things down, Dents!!" so I get what you're talking about lol. I'll keep all that in mind

Ah shoot you're right. I meant Dracula I think. Welp this is why I shouldn't do late night reviews.

Omg i have so much trouble formatting stuff on here, so that's really helpful! I'm on my phone at school right now so I'm gonna properly read what you said ...

Yeah, looking over it I've changed my thing to poetry rather than short story. thanks for pointing that out :D

Thank you for at least taking the time to check it out.

Hello author. I'm going to assume from this piece that you aren't familiar with the site: .I'd like to respectfully request that you take some time out of your day ...

Thanks so much for the review! I'm always happy to find a fellow fan. Anyways, I'll do my best to reply to your points. Ok so with it being canon, ...

Lol, it's fine. Green room is pretty full anyways so I wasn't really expecting fast reviews.

Yeah, it is XD

Thanks for the review! Like I said before, I'm planning on editing it once I've got the whole thing published (which might take a bit coz of my exams coming ...

Thanks for the review! I was worried it was getting too long so it's nice to see that someone disagrees with me and thinks I should've added more coz I ...

Thanks for the review! I was worried it was getting too long so it's nice to see that someone disagrees with me and thinks I should've added more coz I ...