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A Treasure Passed
I wrote this several years ago, but I still like it. I'm not really any good at poetry. Criticism is appreciated. Did you see the rose petal in the sky?It ...
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Faerie Incident
It's kind of short, but I'm posting it anyways. Criticism makes things better. I'd appreciate it. Violet eyes were watching meThey bore into me and made my skin creepSoft voices ...
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Hand Vrs. Head
Other than editing old poems, this is the first poetry I've written recently. I appreciate reviews. My poetry definitely needs improvement. I edited. (thanks for the reviews) I'll finish editing ...
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The Job of the Writer
I'd like to know what you think about this poem. I'm not sure it flows too well, but it's hard to judge my own work. Criticism is appreciated. When you ...