apple96

I agree with the things said above but I dont think any one mentioned something that I noticed when I read through it And a anxiousness to see This 'a' ...

I love it and definately think there should be a sequal/trilogy/however many you really want to write! I really liked the developement of the relationships between the characters. Well Done! ...

I like the story but I think they fall in love way to fast. I mean they don't know each other at all and their already kissing and walking each ...

I agree with Esther that you may have used I to much and could try to put a bit more detail in to it. I also really like the MC ...

Hiya, Me and my friends read this script out loud and we all literally laughed out loud! We didn't really get it but thought it was really funny. We hope ...

Hiya, I couldn't find any mistakes in this and I loved it. My favourite character was Riley as my auntie used to have a dog that matches his description but ...

I enjoyed this and think some of your ideas are interesting. I especially liked the slight humour you used at one point my favourite was this piece and sadly her ...