apachecove

Wow. this was wonderful. It's a really sweet story, very full of emotions. I loved the relationship and chemistry between the two characters, and the way you slowly led up ...

Wow. This really brings back memories of Narnia. It's perfect. There is a lot of great details to this, it flows wonderfully. It doesn't read like the original, obviously, but ...

Okay, to start off, I have to tell you that this isn't bad. In fact, your character has the sort of blunt voice that makes the story really move forward, ...