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This chapter did take me a bit, but I'm generally a really quick writer! Thank you!

Hi, I thought this short and sweet chapter was really cute. I love how you put thought into having them meet at the same place Hayden confessed his feelings for ...

Hi, I quite like the scene. I felt the dialogue was really realistic and it was easy to tell the relationship between the characters and the scene played out. Overall ...

Hi, I really liked this first chapter! I thought the preschool idea was really cute and you did a really good job at keeping the fun and playful tone through ...