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Thanks for the review chances are i won't edit it. It actually was supposed to sound like a diary entry. I wrote it when i was sad and needed to ...

Thanks. I get what you are saying. The only arguement i have to make is that I left out some information on purpose. I left the info out so the ...

Thanks! I will keep all of those things in mind. As for the music... Well it is what you feel about it. It to me is more Alternative rock. It ...

Thank you very much for the review. I am sorry that you did not like it sargsauce. As for your quotes i have some answers or I guess arguments. Before ...

Please continue to review my friend says she will read it with five reviews

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Thank you all for your reviews. I am happy you all liked it. I will get on rewriting it so that you can understand it better. I would also like ...

Please review. I need the feedback!!

Thank you.this is very helpful I am not going to make another edited verson I will just post the second chapter. Again thank you!

This is a good piece. I like it and can defitaly realate to it. There are a few typos, nothing to big. I cant wait to see more.

Wow. I luv it but more description about Dylan. Other than that...WOW!